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The time I have left is less than an hour
Each seconds that passes, I lose even more power
I'm sorry you have to see me this way
I wish I could stay with you at least one more day
My vision is starting to get to dark
But I can still see us running in the park
Your voice I can barely hear
But I can still sense that you are near
Somehow I'm still awake
Just how much longer is this going to take
My dear, when I die
Promise me you won't cry
Go on whatever you do
No matter what I'll always be watching over you
I know that you will be able to stay strong
If you just keep on going, nothing could possibly go wrong
My heart beat is starting to get slow
What death is like, I will soon know
Before I go, just listen to my last request
Life your life to fullest, while I take my final rest
Try to change the world while I sleep
As I am buried into the ground which will be so deep
Now I cannot see
Where you will go, I will always be
And forget I'm always by your side
So whatever you do, don't hide
Now it is the time to say goodbye my love
Have no fear, because I'll be watching you from above…
©2003-2009 ~MinortyBreeder
:iconminortybreeder:

Author's Comments

Okay! I understand I wasn't following directioms. I'm such a dumbass. I thought this is were you placed the poem. Everything is alright now though. I have everything under control. Here is my latest piece of work...

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:icondj1228:
WoW!!!! I love it!! it's really really touching!! seriously, that's amazing!! i wish i could write like you !!!
:iconsilver-rage:
Aww this is so sweet. It is really good, very powerful emotions.

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I will survive somehow I always do.
:iconminortybreeder:
You're all too nice. Thank you.
:iconminortybreeder:
You're all too nice. Thank you very much.
:iconmizuho:
:D I just love it :) Very sad but still very pretty :D
=) Keep going :D You'r great :D

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'CauS3 I'm OnLy @ G|rL Lo0K|nG FoR H3r Pl@Ce In Th|s CrU3L W0rLd, W|Th n0 InT3nT 0f GeTinG 0uT Of iT!!!

C@uS3 |'m 0nLy @n S@D @nG3L

:sadangel:
:iconminortybreeder:
Thank you very much.^^
:iconmizuho:
:D

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'CauS3 I'm OnLy @ G|rL Lo0K|nG FoR H3r Pl@Ce In Th|s CrU3L W0rLd, W|Th n0 InT3nT 0f GeTinG 0uT Of iT!!!

C@uS3 |'m 0nLy @n S@D @nG3L

:sadangel:
:iconbassplayer16:
this is such a touching poem
so sweet
:iconmilestailsprower-007:
*tears in eyes* Thats...*sniffle*....Pretty.

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"It's a frame of mind, you see!"
- Frederic Chopin (Eternal Sonata)

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