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As the tables of time start to turn
A fire in your heart begins to burn
The flame within you is hotter than hell
What could this mean, only time can tell
People say life is like a maze
There are so many paths and so many ways
You always begin from the road that says “start”
But as you walk on it, it splits apart
It doesn’t matter what path you choose
Because as long as you reach the end you have nothing to loose
Life is a surprising adventure
Whatever lies ahead, you can’t be too sure
Not knowing what’s next, is only half the fun
If you don’t want to miss a moment you better run
The time limit is already set
Whatever you do in life, just don’t regret
Make your life worth living
Don’t waste a second, the clock is ticking
Give the world something to talk about
Your life is a fire, don’t put it out
©2004-2009 ~MinortyBreeder
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Author's Comments

Its been a while since I wrote something, so I came up with this. I got this idea for this poem from a "certain" friend of mine who recently got afraid of death. It's my fault because she read a poem about death that I wrote. *lol* That and my grandma recently passed away so I decided to try and lift my spirits. This poem basically comapres life with fire and a maze. Please enjoy.

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:iconairmega23:
I like this piece. You did a good job of taking your feelings on various things, and describing them in a way that is both pleasing to the ear, but also it is also very easy to understand.
The poem has a good diction, it is very simple, however that made it all the more effective, as it allowed your meaning to be clear. The flow was pretty good, however you could have used a bit of puncuation to make it just that much better. However, you did use linebreaks effectively.

Keep it up

Greg

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:iconjeido-hoshi:
u wright really good poetry :smooch:
:iconkleo-neko:
I love the comparison... You're an excellent writer! :)

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If you've ever seen a one trick pony then you've seen me. ~ Bruce Springsteen - "The Wrestler"
:iconminortybreeder:
Thank you.

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"Every tear that I shed is for every pour soul that died for no cause..."
~MinortyBreeder
:iconlil-artist:
wow

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Ba-Weep-Grah-Nah-Weep-Nini-Bon!
:iconneri-chan:
I'm sorry about your grandma:( :hug: This poem is very good and it deserves a fav!! *lol*So I inspired this?Cool...and I'll try to not be scared anymore now:) Okay, I think I am not...I'll just try to live my life without having to regret anything when I die!:hug:

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:iconlilikaeleniak:
Yay! Another happy poem!
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If life is a maze then all we need is a rocket launcher. BOOM! straight path!

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