As the tables of time start to turn
A fire in your heart begins to burn
The flame within you is hotter than hell
What could this mean, only time can tell
People say life is like a maze
There are so many paths and so many ways
You always begin from the road that says “start”
But as you walk on it, it splits apart
It doesn’t matter what path you choose
Because as long as you reach the end you have nothing to loose
Life is a surprising adventure
Whatever lies ahead, you can’t be too sure
Not knowing what’s next, is only half the fun
If you don’t want to miss a moment you better run
The time limit is already set
Whatever you do in life, just don’t regret
Make your life worth living
Don’t waste a second, the clock is ticking
Give the world something to talk about
Your life is a fire, don’t put it out
















Comments
The poem has a good diction, it is very simple, however that made it all the more effective, as it allowed your meaning to be clear. The flow was pretty good, however you could have used a bit of puncuation to make it just that much better. However, you did use linebreaks effectively.
Keep it up
Greg
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