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Just like a shooting star,
I can go very far.
Farther than beyond my dream.
No matter how hard it may seem.

Even if things then to get rough,
It simply means I have to stay tough.
Flying through outer space,
Knowing for sure that I'll win this race.
The race to be the one,
To go beyond the sun,
Not know what's head is only half the fun

Do I have a destiny?
And if I do, where can I find the key?
Why was I put here?
Why can't the answer be so clear?
Will I ever know?
And if I do, where do I go?
As I stand on Mercury,
I hear a voice calling me.

While I stare up at the sky,
I try to figure out why.
Knowing how simple the answer must be.
Yet, how hard it is to see.

If I happen to get lost,
I'll find my way out at any cost.
Going from planet to planet,
Through this meteor storm, knowing that I can handle it.
I can handle anything.
Even if I have one wing,
I'll become master of the ring.

How do I decide which path?
How do I figure out the math?
Where will it lead?
Will I ever succeed?
Why do I even dare?
Why do I bother to care?
No matter what, I won't ever cry,
Because my heart will never die.

....sometimes I wish
That all the bad things will perish.
If I continue to act weak,
I'll never find the answer seek.

With my power,
I will survive this devastating hour.
The only way I can go along,
Is if I grow strong.
Stronger than Jupiter
For my future...
©2004-2009 ~MinortyBreeder
:iconminortybreeder:

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cheezy poem filled with cheezy goodness. enjoy or hate. I just dont care anymore

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:iconlinky390:
this is beautiful... didn't know oyu where a poet.. :) this is how i feel too.. sometimes i even wonder ehy i was placed on this game of life. sometimes i think that god had the strings to my hands and feet and guides me to do things... and he controls who i meet and how. i'm weird like that... :) but i don't care anymore.

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:iconronjanoku:
its a poem of galactic proportions and franchise winners =D

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"Im simply a man of things that no-longer exist anymore"- Ronja
:iconraine-san:
That was sooo beautiful I shall fave

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:icontheanimefangirl101:
i love all the things you type C: your a good poet. i dont really like poems but i love all of yours! XD

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me and my freinds are the type of people who will spend days trying to drown a fish. >~<
:iconminortybreeder:
Dear Lost Star,

Thank you very much for you comment. I know this reply is a bit beyond late, but your message does mean a lot to me, seeing how I don't get a lot of them anymore these days. lol Anyway when I get time I'll take a look at gallery and see what you have to offer. Until then please take care and once again thanks a lot.

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Fate and Fake is everything
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Edit: Didn't mean to call you Lost Star. LOL I'm so tired. T_T

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Fate and Fake is everything
:icontheanimefangirl101:
hi

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me and my freinds are the type of people who will spend days trying to drown a fish. >~<

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